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Trixie returns to Ponyville to face her past and gain a new life. However she finds much in the rural village, and not all of it is bad. The ultimatum to I Won't See You Tonight.
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joeyh3 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This series finally came up on my ever-growing "fanfic to read" list. Absolutely loved it! The first chapter was quite heartbreaking and sad, but the ending was very adorable and wonderful. I felt that this was a very excellent backstory to Trixie's past.
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
I'm planning on adding this to the post-Allegrezza to-do list. :3
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XRider76 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
I just realized these are named after Avenged Sevenfold songs!
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Bonestonecrusher Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011
A7x and my little pony?... YEEESSSSSS!!!! :iconfuckyeahplz:
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Crystal-Eclair Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was a really nice story, well written and thought out. good work.

would there be a story to continue this? i am interested to see how things turn out for them with them having a foal together.
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
I was planning one, but it's on the backburner for now. Sadly I can't think of an interesting story that doesn't play out like Out in the Cold or Past Sins.
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Crystal-Eclair Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Perhaps the struggles they go through during the pregnancy, being parents, and the struggles the child has for having two mothers, things like that maybe, thats that can test their lover for each other
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
Mmmm, Out in the Cold had a very similar thing going on.
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Crystal-Eclair Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
but that was with trixie and twilight and involved luna, perhaps sink pinkie is an earth pony and so silly and lively, she may put a unquie twist on things
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
It's thinking up that unique twist that bugs me. :S
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Crystal-Eclair Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i can see Pinkie being like a big kid herself and that could be very embarrasing for their kid or perhaps their kid could be just as lively as Pinkie and could cause alot of trouble
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
Yeh, I'm trying to think of something more than slice of life. E.g., an over-arching plot throughout it all.
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MohawkRex Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Ponies and The Fold... you sir are a crusader!
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
The Fold? This sounds familiar...but I can't remember from where. XD
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chiyoXosakafan Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
This was really cute and surprisingly deep....especially the scene where they entered the afterlife!
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Glad to hear it! :D

Was a fun quadrilogy to write.
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chiyoXosakafan Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
I bet it was I hope to write something as epic one day myself and I gotta say your stories inspired me!
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Glad to hear, have you tried any writing yet?
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chiyoXosakafan Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Yeah I've written a lot of short fiction in my short 17 years so far but I want to try writing bigger stories!
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
This was the longest single-chapter I'd ever written...about 10,000 words. Wanted to wrap up the story in a nice way, still slipped up a little on the shipping, but I tried.
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chiyoXosakafan Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Personally I thought it was really realistic in terms of romance and the interactions between Pinkie and Trixie were just amazingly powerful!
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Thanks. Both for the lovely comment, and for the watch. :D
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ISMFOFWitMatches Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
Uh...yeah. The title mislead me a little but whatever great fic, though I am not much of a shipping reader. I thought they would...nevermind.

So what now? Are they comin back, comin back, then live FOREVER, live FOREVER, then have the wedding, have the wedding... then start the killing, start the killing?

Maybe?
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Queenified Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
WHOA!
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
Whoa?
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Queenified Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
That was pretty good.
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
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foxshine Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011   Digital Artist
holy crap its trixie pie.. or is it pixie?

no idea, however, i concede "oddest couple" to you x.x
I'll be damned if it doesn't work though, nice job :D
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
I'd say Trinkie Pie. :D

And I'm not sure, I'd say we're tied personally.
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foxshine Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011   Digital Artist
either way, trixie + pinkie = SWEET RAVE PARTIES! /glowstick XD
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
I wanted to write a scene where they do a double act on stage, but yeh, maybe in a future installment.
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foxshine Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011   Digital Artist
pinkie would make a great acrobat.
but with Trixie's illusory magics, imagine
the laser/strobe/pyrotechnic show she could do x.x
Sweet.
Rave.
Parties.
nuff said XD
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
I imagine Pinkie as Trixie's "lovely assistant" in this one. Still unsure about if I'll even do a follow-up, but fingers/hooves crossed I think of something good. I have drawings and two other series in the meantime anyway.
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foxshine Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011   Digital Artist
true enough there, trixie has more focus for that sort of thing.
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
She'd be the magic, I dunno what I could do for Pinkie. Other than the generic stuff, maybe some faux-damsel-in-distress? (If Pinkie could ever pretend to be in danger without laughing at it.) XD
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Qaxis Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
That was cute. Some of their interactions, like when Trixie was pretending to be a vampony, where really adorable. You...you kind of made me like Trixie here.

I'm just now sad nothing of quite this scale has been done for Twinkie Pie.
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
My first attempt at shipping, there's alot I need to improve, but hey, I'll keep it in mind for future fics I write.

I'm glad I brought you round to the Great and Powerful side slightly. :P
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Qaxis Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
For your first attempt, its pretty good. The only real knit-pick I recall is that it seemed a bit...odd to me that they were just told how the other feels. It kind of takes away some of the shipping tension.

On the other hand, it set up Trixie for a funny little joke at the end, so...
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Joke at the end? :S

Also yeh, problem was I had to wrap up the story from the last three as well.
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Qaxis Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Where Trixie says her sister told her how to shut Pinkie up. I felt like it was a joke, anyway. ...was I wrong?

I did figure that was why you did it, and it was a good way to do that. It was just a little thing.
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Oh right that, yeh. I wanted to lighten the mood a little.
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TheDragonWarlock Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
This really surprised me. I never seen a Trixie Pie fic before, and the way you did it was beautiful, and heartwarming. There were good twists in it, and I loved the idea. Well done. :D
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Thanks. I wanted to cap off the series nicely, and Pinkie semed like the best pony for cheering up Trixie's life.
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TheDragonWarlock Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Well I think it's a great change of pace. I have seen very few stories of Trixie with another pony besides Twilight. No I don't hate Twixie shipping at all. I love seeing a change in pace every now and then. :D
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
I do love Twixie though. Especially Out in the Cold and The Ballad of Twilight Sparkle.

Although I am possibly, minorly responsible for the next chapter of The Ballad taking so long.
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TheDragonWarlock Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
How so?
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
I keep challenging the writer on TF2, and distracted him with a chat about how a pony would use a sniper for a couple of hours. (Among other things.)
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TheDragonWarlock Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Uh oh! Way to mess him up. (no offense)
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CoffeeGrunt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Meh, he's written two versions of the chapter and needs time to decide on which one, so he'll be a while posting it up anyhoo.
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McGack Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
Awww that was nice :), and my playlist agreed with what going on as I read..... for the most part
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